Bar #37

Rap God

Eminem

So you'll be Thor and I'll be Odin You rodent, I'm omnipotent Let off, then I'm reloadin' Immediately with these bombs I'm totin' And I should not be woken I'm the walkin' dead, but I'm just a talkin' head, a zombie floatin' But I got your mom deep-throatin' I'm out my Ramen Noodle, we have nothin' in common, poodle I'm a Doberman, pinch yourself in the arm and pay homage, pupil It's me, my honesty's brutal But it's honestly futile if I don't utilize what I do though For good at least once in a while So I wanna make sure somewhere in this chicken scratch I scribble and doodle enough rhymes To maybe try to help get some people through tough times But I gotta keep a few punchlines Just in case 'cause even you unsigned Rappers are hungry lookin' at me like it's lunchtime

Rhyme Scheme

A bent near-rhyme chain (Odin/omnipotent/reloadin'/totin'/woken/floatin'/deep-throatin') sustained for seven bars, layered with three short internal pockets (walkin'/talkin', dead/head, Ramen/common/Doberman, arm/homage), pivoting through a trochaic oodle/pupil cluster and a brutal/futile slant pair, then closing on a six-bar single-vowel-nasal run with shifting codas

Producer Notes

Eminem sustains a single bent near-rhyme target across seven bars by stressing and reshaping consonants to fit, while running smaller internal pockets underneath it: the short 'ead' echo in 'walkin' dead... talkin' head,' the unstressed '-mən' family threading through 'Ramen'/'common'/'Doberman,' and a quieter 'ɑːm' echo between 'arm' and 'homage.' After a trochaic 'oodle/pupil' pivot and a brutal/futile slant pairing, he closes with a six-bar run built on one vowel-nasal core, varying only the final consonant cluster so the chain doesn't feel repetitive.

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