Bar #3
Stay Wide Awake
Eminem
So dark and so cold, my friends don't know this other side of me There's a monster inside of me, it's quite ugly and it frightens me But they can't see what I can see, there's a vacancy in my tummy It's making me play hide-and-seek, like Jason I'm so hungry She's naked, see? No privacy, but I can see she wants me So patient, see? I try to be, but wait, she smells like damp sheets Is she waiting for me to make her scream? Her skin's turning orange-y No tan, she, she's cramping, she's no pansy, she's fancy
Rhyme Scheme
Dense multi-syllabic rhyme scheme shifting from /aɪ-ə-mi/ (side of me) to /æ-ən-si/ (fancy)
Producer Notes
Eminem utilizes a sophisticated three-syllable dactylic rhyme scheme (/DA-da-da/) that seamlessly morphs from the 'side of me' sound to the 'fan-cy' sound through forced pronunciation (accent rhyming). The verse demonstrates elite technical proficiency by maintaining this complex multi-syllabic pattern not just at the end of lines, but relentlessly throughout the internal structure of every bar.
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